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Zebruh
Joined: 10 Dec 2007 Posts: 1537 Location: Massachusetts
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The sun sets on this beautiful moonlit night,
as the clouds part through the already light blue gloaming.
She set a rose in her hair-
The poor bush from where the petals' plucked stands now bare,
for all the infinitum of stars of the day to
glaze over with their judgment.
The flower will grow back again,
but the lovely one is gone, kid.
Edit: Before someone says something about the contradictions in the poem, they're supposed to be there. _________________ ಡ u ಡ
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Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:10 pm |
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Izzy
Joined: 18 Feb 2009 Posts: 633 Location: Location: Location: Location: Location: Location: Location: Location: Location: Redundancy win?
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It's wonderful. :D Great job as always zeb. _________________
My three characters are: Americano, Fla1t and Zyzz |
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Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:29 pm |
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GlitchyVirus
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 5:36 am |
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Zebruh
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That's why he's up there. _________________ ಡ u ಡ
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Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:01 am |
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ShadowNguyen91
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Bump _________________
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Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:44 am |
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Monochrome
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What more do you want? |
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Wed Dec 01, 2010 1:39 pm |
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ShadowNguyen91
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Nothing O:<
Just letting people read the poetry people wrote. Not many people see it on the very last page of a thread. _________________
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