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-Ayane-



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Romeo apart of a hundred miles,
Astray from Juliet's serenade sight,
Trigger her tears to meekly fall,
Demolishing her everglowing spirit.

Darkness clothes on Heaven rim,
As a rose breathe in dark forest,
Her aura evolve into windswept pity,
Turning into storm paralyzed entirety.

Every thought of the knight,
Swaying his sword in war,
Roaming in the aphotic forest,
Tainting the soul of rose.

Reincarnation of light,
Unclothe the holy heaven,
Solacing rose and forest,
Arise with the return of knight.

By me / ayane / erin <3
Tue Dec 29, 2009 11:36 am
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Zebruh



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I liked the replacement for night with "Knight."
But honestly, I didn't read anything else.
It's too difficult to keep my attention with text.
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Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:44 pm
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-Ayane-



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Lmao! its not night actually..its actually about the love between me and a guy that i like...so i use romeo represent him and juliet as me..

Well for the third stanza..the knight mean my beloved which mean every thought of him is running in my mind and that cause me a lot of pain and ruining my world..

I just use a lot of symbolic meaning in this poem haha...well I'm a new poet Smile teach me anything you can muahaha! Anyway thank you Very Happy
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Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:20 am
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I said I liked the replacement of "Night" with "Knight."
Not the misplacement.
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Wed Dec 30, 2009 1:53 am
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It's romancie.
I rate this, Comsi comsa.

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Thu Dec 31, 2009 7:49 am
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Oh im sorry Zeb haha~

@Izzy - whats comsi comsa? Shocked
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Comsi Comsa is French for so so. xD
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Thu Dec 31, 2009 5:15 pm
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Aw?
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