[TearOtoku]

: D~

[Sheik]

Albel & Saku
I got lazy with details, so I just put it up the way it is.
I'll add more details eventually.

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[TearOtoku]

oh baby lol

[Makoto Uragi]

That one just plain out scares me
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[Sheik]

That's not constructive
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[Zebruh]

Not naked enough.
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ಡ u ಡ
Ræp time.

[XBlackCatXIII]

I like teh eyes
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Moonlil - Gypsy
Alexial - Gunslinger
Ellone - Whitesmith

[Sheik]

it's my character on PSO~
Kari Izuna, and her mag Sato x:

[Izzy]

Hmmmm~... Give the legs more of a bend and shape. The straight lines don't compliment her very much...Don't forget that a female shin goes outwards a little as opposed to males. They're also a little too long. Legs usually go to about 2 head sizes and a half. Also, where the lower arm and thumb meet there needs to be a bit of a bump. Fingers don't usually curve like that, unless you have Magic skillz. Cleavage needs to be rounder...and another cleavage line for the other boobie needs to be drawn as well. Because they're under a closed fishnet that pulls them together and obviously adds more definition. Add another small line a bit above the eyes for eyelids.
Try adding some clothing folds in your next drawing and don't be afraid to use some more curved lines! =D

This is my constructive criticism~
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My three characters are: Americano, Fla1t and Zyzz

[Sheik]

yay~ constructiveness~
lol looking at that picture, it's horridly ugly <<
BUT thanks for the help~ maybe i can use it o.o;
i'll have to pay attention to it when i draw again >>
-lazy-

[Izzy]

Yup yup.
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My three characters are: Americano, Fla1t and Zyzz